Poetry: Is it ChatGPT or Anna Jordan
April 5, 2023
Which poem was written by the AI engine ChatGPT, and which poem was written by me, Rosary’s resident poet, Anna Jordan?
Poem 1:
“Life Anew”
Raindrops fall from up high,
As I curl up with my book by and by.
Pomegranate seeds I pluck and eat,
While the kite dances in the breeze so sweet.
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A cross stands tall in the distance,
As a doll watches from a safe existence.
And a bear in the corner, cuddled tight,
Listens to the pitter-patter through the night.
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Oh, how the rain brings life anew,
To all the things we thought we knew.
And as the storm begins to wane,
Memories of this moment will forever remain.
Poem #2
“Seedling Pearls”
Hades gave me the greatest gift of all
For it does rain in the underworld
And a book replaced a doll
I grew into a pitiful girl
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With a chip on my shoulder
And my kite scraping the ceiling.
Little knows mother Demeter
Of my love for feeling
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So melancholy in my lonely days.
It is better than pure joy
For nothing more do I praise
Then Hades’ gift of a fruitful Troy
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Pomegranate pearls from my palm stare
Hades gave me a cross to bear.
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Ms. Barclay surveyed a select group of Rosary humanities elites to see which poem struck them as being penned by a human and which poem had the heartless art of computer programming. These were the results:
About 17% of those surveyed believed that I wrote poem #1 while about 83% thought that I wrote poem #2. And the answer is…
I WROTE POEM #2! What did you think? Which did you like more? And, if you thought I wrote #2, what were you thinking?! Comment your thoughts and remember: the computers will never beat Anna Jordan! Look out for the next installment of this series: me vs. Ms. Barclay!
Mrs. Ward • Apr 23, 2023 at 8:48 am
#2 Duh. Anyone who thought that Anna would write something light and uplifting about rain has never met her.
Kendall Clarida • Apr 19, 2023 at 9:49 am
As a true Anna Jordan fan, I knew which one was hers all along.
Christina Vaughan • Apr 5, 2023 at 4:02 pm
I knew #2 was yours! It was a lot better, it flowed really nicely and the structure was way more Anna-esque.